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3. Based on the feedback, I tried to talk slower and be more concise in my pitch. I have found myself very comfortable with my pitch now and able to recite it from memory. Also, the camera has never bothered me, so I feel as if my elevator pitch is almost perfect at this point.
Hey Chris!
ReplyDeleteI think it was a huge improvement rounding the statistic! It flows so much smoother and feels like it carries more impact. In this pitch I like how you really focused on pronouncing everything very well and making sure everything is easier to understand. You can tell you have become much more confident in front of the camera. Your pitch has made great improvements.
Great post!
Hi Christopher,
ReplyDeleteI am genuinely really impressed with your pitch. It seems like you’ve got it down pat. It starts off with a nice hook, it’s engaging for the entire time, and you are persuasive with the way you speak. You seem really conformable with it and have a firm understanding of what you’re trying to accomplish with it. I don’t really have any improvements. Good job!
Hi Chris!
ReplyDeleteWow this was an incredible pitch. You have clearly taken your time to master and rehearse everything you are saying and talking about. I don't really know what to say about improving yourself. Maybe add in a few more hook lines in order to keep your audience engaged? This is so awesome! Keep up the good work! Very easy to follow and understand.