Hello Christopher, I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. You were very energetic and enthusiastic about your business venture. I totally agree that vaping is not a good thing, but I don’t think banning a product is the best solution because banning alcohol did not produce a positive result. As you said towards the end, I am curious what is going to be done with the vapes and accessories?
Hey Christopher! You seemed very passionate about your opportunity! I think it would be really captivating if you started your pitch with a statistic about the epidemic in order to hook your audience. Something along the lines of how many people have gotten sick or the amount of deaths from vapes or the number of states banning the vapes. Other than that, I think you did a good job!
Hi Christopher, This was a great pitch. You were very engaging and it was easy to stay invested throughout the entire pitch. You seem to care a lot about this issue and have a very solid idea in place. This a serious problem that requires a serious solution. Well done.
Hello Christopher,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. You were very energetic and enthusiastic about your business venture. I totally agree that vaping is not a good thing, but I don’t think banning a product is the best solution because banning alcohol did not produce a positive result. As you said towards the end, I am curious what is going to be done with the vapes and accessories?
Hey Christopher! You seemed very passionate about your opportunity! I think it would be really captivating if you started your pitch with a statistic about the epidemic in order to hook your audience. Something along the lines of how many people have gotten sick or the amount of deaths from vapes or the number of states banning the vapes. Other than that, I think you did a good job!
ReplyDeleteHi Christopher,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great pitch. You were very engaging and it was easy to stay invested throughout the entire pitch. You seem to care a lot about this issue and have a very solid idea in place. This a serious problem that requires a serious solution. Well done.